Answer to Question #241277 in English for ABC

Question

How would you rewrite the paragraph if you were given the task of editing the paragraph? [Hint: arrangement of lines, use of proper language 

Answer 1

Each paragraph in the body of the essay should contain: a topic sentence that states the main or controlling idea. supporting sentences to explain and develop the point you're making. evidence from your reading or an example from the subject area that supports your point.

The steps to be followed are;

1. Step1 — write an outline. When writing a paragraph, first write an outline of the paragraph and include:
2. Step 2 — write the topic sentence. Write a topic sentence.
3. Step 3 — write supporting sentences. Next write a supporting sentence for each point.
4. Step 4 — concluding sentence.
5. Step 5 — final paragraph.