Answer to Question #241274 in English for ABC

Question

Write a brief introduction about the communication etiquette to be observed in business writing and rewrite the given sentences following the communication etiquette

a. You are not allowed to attend the conference as you did not register before the due date.

b. All the employees can bring their wives for the Golden Jubilee Celebration of the organization.

c. Two people attending the conference from our company will be the Asian Manager and the old accountant.

d. An efficient salesman can easily convince his clients.

e. Despite his walking disability, John is the most eligible candidate for the post. f. Do not expect a refund for returning the damaged goods.

g. There are several errors in the mails drafted by you

h. We need to recruit more manpower in order to complete the project within the given deadline.

Answer 1

a) kindly, you are not allowed to attend the conference because you registered after the deadline

b)All employees are allowed to come along with their partners for the Golden Jubilee Celebration of the organization.

c)The manager from Asia and our former accountant will represent our company in the conference

d)A good salesman knows how to convince his customer

e)John is the most eligible candidate for the post despite his disability

f)There's no refund for damaged goods

g)The mails you drafted have some errors

h)More manpower should be added to enable us complete the project within the given deadline.