Answer to Question #239232 in English for LWAZI

Question

Rewrite the lead paragraph of the media release below so that it addresses the deficiencies, errors and omissions that you may have identified in the previous question:

We all remember our matric dances, right? It is a night to remember. And in the age of social media, you need to dress to impress. A dress boutik named Stella Fashions located in Mall of Africa and online also. Come find your dress here. It is the best dress shop in South Africa. Only celebrities shop here but we also allow normal people and normal prices here too. If there is a celebrity is our shop don’t embarrass us and approach them. Let them shop in peace for God’s sake. Lol. We also realise that there are some students who are poor and cannot buy a good dress. So we have decided to give away 5 dresses. All you have to do is send us a TikTok video about why you think you are worthy of a a dress from our great shop.

Answer 1

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