Answer to Question #239151 in English for Busani Dlamini

Question

Evaluate the following lead paragraph of this media release for its efficacy, fairness, accuracy, clarity, style and usage of correct grammar:

It is the best dress shop in South Africa. Only celebrities shop here but we also allow normal people and normal prices here too. If there is a celebrity is our shop don’t embarrass us and approach them. Let them shop in peace for God’s sake. Lol. We also realise that there are some students who are poor and cannot buy a good dress. So we have decided to give away 5 dresses. All you have to do is send us a TikTok video about why you think you are worthy of a a dress from our great shop.

Answer 1

You get a competitive advantage by dressing to impress. It can assist you in getting a job and drum up a new business or close a prospective transaction. When you dress correctly, it demonstrates that you care about yourself, and you are now ready to care for your clients.