Answer to Question #239146 in English for Busani Dlamini

Question

Evaluate the following headline and lead paragraph of this media release for its efficacy, fairness, accuracy, clarity, style and usage of correct grammar:

Matriculation Dresses from Stella Fashions Will Help You Too Look Like A Star for Your Matriculation Dance and It is Also Not Too Expensive At All (Trust Me)

Johannesburg (SashayNews.com) 09/03 – We all remember our matric dances, right? It is a night to remember. And in the age of social media, you need to dress to impress. A dress boutique named Stella Fashions located in Mall of Africa and online also. Come find your dress here.

Answer 1

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