Answer to Question #239276 in Management for Jack Patz

Question

Mountains and Dunes a travel company created an attractive and illustrative brochure for its prospective customers. However, an insensitive content writer created the following content which was sure to crash the business. Come and explore the undiscovered India with us. We provide an excellent service to all those travelling with us.If you are one such privileged customer, our staff will be available to you 24x 7. Men would fall in love with the adventurous treks and camps we provide. Mountains and Dunes cares about women and children too. It brings to you the freedom of cooking your meals anytime of the day in the state of art kitchens attached with every accommodation that we provide. So come enjoy and feel at home with Mountains and Dunes.

A). What are the supposedly inappropriate elements in the paragraph written by the content developer?

Answer 1

• Men would fall in love with the adventurous treks and camps we provide.
• It brings you the freedom of cooking your meals any time of the day in the state of art kitchens attached with every accommodation that we provide