Answer to Question #289607 in English for Khadar hassan

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1.While correcting papers, the message came from the principal.

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2.When she first smiled.

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3. The purser explained to the passenger the meaning of the regulation he djust read..

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4.Einstein liked mathematical research more than to supervise a large laboratory.

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5.To finish her paper on time, Mary's weekend was spent in the library.

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6.Mr. Smith was smiled at Mr. Jones when he was awarded the trophy.

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7.Franks and beans are a popular army dish.

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8. I use our library often the reference section is my favorite part.

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9.Transportation began early in human history over water.

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10. To think logically is an important to me as calculating accurately.

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Answer 1

1. While correcting papers, the message came from the principal.

Error Type: Omission of pronouns

Correction: While we were correcting papers, the message came from the principal.

2. When she first smiled.

Error Type: Incomplete sentence

Correction: When she first smiled, (...)

3. The purser explained to the passenger the meaning of the regulation he djust read..

Error Type: Incorrect spelling, ambiguous sentence.

Correction: The purser explained to the passenger the meaning of the road regulation he just read.

4. Einstein liked mathematical research more than to supervise a large laboratory

Error Type: Incorrect word form

Correction: Einstein liked mathematics research more than supervising a large laboratory.

5. To finish her paper on time, Mary's weekend was spent in the library.

Error Type: Ambiguous sentence, hard to follow, poor sentence structure.

Correction: Mary's weekend was spent in the library to finish her paper on time.

6. Mr. Smith was smiled at Mr. Jones when he was awarded the trophy.

Error Type: Wrong tense or verb form  

Correction: Mr. Smith smiled at Mr. Jones when he was awarded the trophy.

7. Franks and beans are a popular army dish.

Error Type: Incorrect singular/plural agreement

Correction: Franks and beans are popular army dishes.

8. I use our library often the reference section is my favorite part.

Error Type: Omitted Semi Colon

Correction: I use our library often; the reference section is my favorite part.

9.Transportation began early in human history over water.

Error Type: Incorrect form of adverb instead of comparative adjective

Correction: Transportation began earlier in human history over water.

10. To think logically is an important to me as calculating accurately.

Error Type: Improper use of article

Correction: To think logically is as important to me as calculating accurately.