Answer to Question #239720 in English for Samke

Question

Rewrite the lead paragraph of the media release below so that it addresses the deficiencies, errors and omissions that you may have identified in the previous question:





We all remember our matric dances, right? It is a night to remember. And in the age of social media, you need to dress to impress. A dress boutik named Stella Fashions located in Mall of Africa and online also. Come find your dress here. It is the best dress shop in South Africa. Only celebrities shop here but we also allow normal people and normal prices here too. If there is a celebrity is our shop don’t embarrass us and approach them. Let them shop in peace for God’s sake. Lol. We also realise that there are some students who are poor and cannot buy a good dress. So we have decided to give away 5 dresses. All you have to do is send us a TikTok video about why you think you are worthy of a a dress from our great shop.

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Dressing to impress is required in this era of social media. For instance, there are dresses which are suitable for matric dances. Stella Fashions is one of the boutique where one can get different clothes from based on the intended function. The boutique is located in Mall of Africa and operates as an online clothesline. The boutique is one of best dress shop in South Africa. Most of the clients for the company is celebrities though all customers are allowed to shop with it. Given the prices of the dresses, most of the students cannot afford them due to their poor background. The company decided to give away five dresses. All one has to do send to Stella Fashions a TikTok video about why you think you are worthy of a dress from their great shop.