Answer to Question #198377 in English for Heather

Question

Read the text below and determine whether the appropriate diction was used in the correspondence. Provide a suitable reason for your answer.

"Dear lecture

I am very upset for the 20% mark allocated to my assignment. I am wondering if the lecture marked my assignment or just make a guess. I want this assignment marked as soon as possible."

Answer 1

No, the tone in the response is apprehensive and rude at best. Furthermore, the diction on the response appears to use the wrong tense as well as pronouns while referring to the "lecturer"