Answer to Question #178812 in English for will

Question

(14) Nearly as captivating as the elevator in the tunnel located beneath the Aqua Dom. (15) Visitors are surrounded by fish on their left, on their right, and over their heads, strolling through the clear shaft.

What is the most effective way to revise sentence 15?

a. Visitors are surrounded by fish strolling through the clear shaft on their left, on their right, and over their heads.

b. Strolling through the clear shaft, visitors are surrounded by fish on their left, on their right, and over their heads.

c. On their left, on their right, and over their heads, fish are surrounded by visitors strolling through the clear shaft.

d. Sentence 15 should not be revised.

Answer 1

b. Strolling through the clear shaft, visitors are surrounded by fish on their left, on their right, and over their heads