Answer to Question #260172 in Management for juu

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 Come and explore the undiscovered India with us. We provide an excellent service to all those travelling with us. Our special customers staying in seven-star accommodations are treated as kings. If you are one such privileged customer, our staff will be available to you 24x 7. Men would fall in love with the adventurous treks and camps we provide. Mountains and Dunes cares about women and children too. It brings to you the freedom of cooking your meals anytime of the day in the state of art kitchens attached with every accommodation that we provide. So come enjoy and feel at home with Mountains and Dunes. Remember we choose the best locations for you. You will surely enjoy our services. Though our rates are a relatively high but it is justified with the class of tourists we cater to. Bag packers are not out clients. Remember- we are a class apart and so are our clients. a.. How would you rewrite the paragraph if you were given the task of editing the paragraph? arrangement of lines, use of proper language

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Come and explore the undiscovered with us in India, remember we choose the best location for you and you with surely enjoy our services. Our special clients occupying seven stars are treated like kings. Thus, if you become one of such privileged customers, our staff will be available for you 24/7. Furthermore, every accommodation r has a kitchen in form of art that provides our clients the freedom of cooking their meals any time of the day. However, we provide excellent services to all those traveling with us, and also we provide adventurous treks camps that men can fall in love with while mountain and dunes care for women and children too. Though our rates are relatively high it is justified with the class of tourists we cater to so bag packers are not our clients. Remember we are a class apart so come enjoy and feel at home with maintain and dune.