Answer to Question #242184 in Management for Arpit

Question

2. Write a brief introduction about the communication etiquette to be observed in business writing and rewrite the given sentences following the communication etiquette

1. You are not allowed to attend the conference as you did not register before the due date.
2. All the employees can bring their wives for the Golden Jubilee Celebration of the
3. organization.
4. Two people attending the conference from our company will be the Asian Manager and
5. the old accountant.
6. An efficient salesman can easily convince his clients.
7. Despite his walking disability, John is the most eligible candidate for the post.
8. Do not expect a refund for returning the damaged goods.
9. There are several errors in the mails drafted by you
10. We need to recruit more manpower in order to complete the project within the given

deadline. 

Answer 1

Written communication has evolved into a timeless mode of communication since the arrival of computers and smartphones. As a result of technical improvements such as email, text messaging, and the internet, less etiquette writing styles have evolved. It's vital to be conscious of your writing etiquette and convey professionalism while writing to your supervisor, coworker, or professor. In your regular business, written letters might help you communicate and be more precise.

1.      You are not allowed to attend the conference as you did not register before the due date.

Answer - Please we are sorry to inform you that you are not allowed to attend the conference due to late registration.

2.      All the employees can bring their wives for the Golden Jubilee Celebration of the organization.

Answer- All the employees may come along with their couples for the Golden Jubilee Celebration of the organization.

3.      Two people attending the conference from our company will be the Asian Manager and the old accountant.

Answer- Two people attending the conference from our company will be the oversees manager and the senior accountant.

4.      An efficient salesman can easily convince his clients.

Answer- Kindly improve on your negotiation skills with the clients, you will be excellent.

5.      Despite his walking disability, John is the most eligible candidate for the post.

Answer- John stood out to be the most eligible candidate for the post.

6.      Do not expect a refund for returning the damaged goods.

Answer - Kindly note that we don't give a refund if the goods are damaged.

7.      There are several errors in the mails drafted by you.

Answer- Kindly rectify your drafts, there are several errors.

8.      We need to recruit more manpower in order to complete the project within the given deadline.

Answer- The project is quite huge to hit the deadline with the available manpower, I suggest we recruit more manpower.